poems (part 63 and a 1/3rd)

Pirate, that is extremely profound. There´s no rule about poetry needing to rhyme. Well done! <img src=smilies/icon_smile.gif width=15 height=15 border=0 align=middle> Oh, and you will not stay &quot;in the dark&quot; forever. When I turned 16 all those years ago, I thought for sure I´d never find &quot;the light&quot;, but three months later my friend dragged me to a party. Met a girl I dated through high school and into college there. Remember, you´re entire life can change by catching or missing a bus. Problem is, you don´t know if catching or missing the bus will make the change. <img src=´http://www.ukobservers.net/cwm/otn/blobs/0000007.gif ´>

Guess ill be taking the bus to school from now on! Awesome poem, pirate. Doesnt sound like anything made in 3 minutes. <img src=´http://www.lancersreactor.org/images/news/monkeydance.gif ´> -ph34r th3 m0nk3y- EB

This poem is really nice! Is this your first attempt or just something you put together? <img src=´http://tachyon15.homestead.com/files/tlrsig.gif ´>

Dammit Bos, ive been catching the bus to work for 6 years and I still haven´t landed a girl on there yet. Of course fishing off the company peer has landed a healthy catch but im not doing that anymore so it´s back to scrimping on the bus.

that was my first attempmt at writing poetry so thanks for all the good input &quot;lets roll&quot;!!!- Todd Beamer flight 93-9/11/01

Well Mustang, looks like you´ll have to miss the bus then.... <img src=smilies/icon_smile_big.gif width=15 height=15 border=0 align=middle> <img src=´http://www.ukobservers.net/cwm/otn/blobs/0000007.gif ´>

The two girls I just went on the trip with, I met while playing basketball at a local park with some pals. (About five months ago). Just for clarification nothing spectacular happened, we played a rather innovative of &quot;spin the bottle&quot; and a variation of the scene from American Pie 2 but there was just the three of us. <img src=smilies/icon_smile.gif width=15 height=15 border=0 align=middle>Hehe. <img src=´http://www.sphosting.com/majorstriker/index.html ´> &quot;If you got someone by the balls, their heart and mind will follow.&quot; - John Wayne

fisrt of all Major stirker u suck!!!! well here is version 1.1 <b>Alone in the dark </b> I set here alone in the dark Pondering what it is like to be in the light I have never seen the light others call love It is the only true unknown for me Others take it for granted they treat it like a rag Discarding it on a whim The light to them comes easy They know not that it is a blessing Not caring, not knowing That it is all life&amp;#8217;s worth Not alone yet lonely I am but still Alone, alone, alone in the dark &quot;lets roll&quot;!!!- Todd Beamer flight 93-9/11/01

This is Fredamns Epistel nr. 27, all made by the Swedish genious Carl Michael Bellman, in case you don´t know swedish: I´m sorry for you, this rocks. V:cllo. - - - Gubben är gammal, urverket dras, Visaren visar, timman ilar. Döden sitt timglas har stält vid mit glas, Kring buteljen strött sina pilar. Törstig jag skådar min Stjerna och Sol. Vandringsman hör nu min Basfiol Movitz, din tjenare hvilar. * * * V:cllo. - - - Klaraste sköte, ljufliga barm! Sorgligt de blommors lif föröddes, Som gaf min far, til min sveda och harm, Vällust i den säng där jag föddes. Men båda sofva. Gutår i förtret! Sjung Movitz, sjung om hur ögat gret Vid de Cypresser som ströddes. * * * V:cllo. - - - Raglande skugga, brusiger min, Skapad at Bacchus gå til handa; Bläddriger tunga af bränvin och vin. Känn där far min, känn där hans anda. Fröja och Bacchus gaf kring den et sken. Movitz lät bland mina fäders ben Detta mit stoft få sig blanda. <img src=´http://www.flightsimnetwork.co…iles/3cb589026c902d58.jpg ´> - Israeli by birth, Israeli by fate, Israeli by heart Edit: less space ´tween the verses. Edited by - Spear on 23-04-2002 21:49:43

Alright, since we´re into poems. I´ll give you one on the fly: As I walked down the beaten path, I heard a raven triumphing a wicked laugh. The piercing sound was echoes by a dozen stray, hastening me along the abandoned way. I tried to forget the echoing reverge, instead it haunted my fearful nerves. Glancing over my shoulder my widened eyes beheld, the gathering swarms of ghostly dead. Were they alive? It could not be! Yet now they stood, staring after me. My pulsing mind afraid and tormented, pushed aside what my heart lamented. And that´s enough for now, tell me if you want me to finish it. I just made this up in the last three minutes. <img src=´http://www.sphosting.com/majorstriker/index.html ´> &quot;If you got someone by the balls, their heart and mind will follow.&quot; - John Wayne

Whoa man, that was, like, deep. It really was quite deep. Indeed it was deep, a work of are eh? Sorry, just having probs with myself Spear

MS : Sounds like a sequel to the famous ACD poem about the raven. (trust me thats a good thing) This has been another thoughtful Post by: <img src=´http://scup.50g.com/scuplogo.jpg ´>